Friday 4 February 2011

Draft Article



2 comments:

  1. I like your layout, your really good at placing your images and text together to make them fit. you also have some very good images, your body positions are good. although I think you should make your title more interesting with a different font, you need 'jj' to stand out.

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  2. Good Points:
    * The layout of the images and text go really well together.
    * The boxes around the writing are really good, they help the text to stand out.

    Things To Improve:
    * Maybe put the title really small in the corner, so it's like a logo on every page.
    * Make 'The world according to' a more attractive font.

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