I like your front cover, the things i think you could improve on are >your title, it doesn't cover the top of the page and doesn't look like a magazine title. > your main image is too small, i think if you make it larger and change the image to one that has a direct mode of address then your front cover will look even better.
but the things I liked about your cover are your costume it helps the audience understand what genre you are doing. also you have a good colour scheme with your text.
You have created a well piece magazine cover. *Point one of good work: Image looking at the title, which makes the audience also look at the title. *Point two of goodwork: the features of the article.
*Point one of improvement: your font is too messy, download the font and type it in. *Point two of improvement: take titles off your artist, because we cant read it and it makes the audience lose interest.
Good Points: * The title font works well for the music genre you've chosen. * The colours red and black work really well together. * The body position works well and also the outfit your wearing works well with the genre.
Things To Improve: * The image could be a direct mode of address to attract the audience easier and also the title could be larger. * There is to much information on the front cover, maybe it would be better if they were cut down to short slogans :)
I thin that your lay out is very good and that you have presented your color and fonts in a professional way however I think that you should make the font a little bigger and you will be marked down for not having a direct mode of address even though it is effective with you looking at the title
I like your front cover, the things i think you could improve on are
ReplyDelete>your title, it doesn't cover the top of the page and doesn't look like a magazine title.
> your main image is too small, i think if you make it larger and change the image to one that has a direct mode of address then your front cover will look even better.
but the things I liked about your cover are your costume it helps the audience understand what genre you are doing. also you have a good colour scheme with your text.
You have created a well piece magazine cover.
ReplyDelete*Point one of good work: Image looking at the title, which makes the audience also look at the title.
*Point two of goodwork: the features of the article.
*Point one of improvement: your font is too messy, download the font and type it in.
*Point two of improvement: take titles off your artist, because we cant read it and it makes the audience lose interest.
Good Points:
ReplyDelete* The title font works well for the music genre you've chosen.
* The colours red and black work really well together.
* The body position works well and also the outfit your wearing works well with the genre.
Things To Improve:
* The image could be a direct mode of address to attract the audience easier and also the title could be larger.
* There is to much information on the front cover, maybe it would be better if they were cut down to short slogans :)
I thin that your lay out is very good and that you have presented your color and fonts in a professional way however I think that you should make the font a little bigger and you will be marked down for not having a direct mode of address even though it is effective with you looking at the title
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